Nathaniel's bus experience was presupposed to be simply one other boring commute. However now, he, 23... Learn extra Nathaniel's bus experience was presupposed to be simply one other boring commute. However now, he, 23 fellow passengers, and a corgi named Biscuit are caught in a "Hell issue" tutorial, battling monsters and leveling up. With 5 years to get to Earth, Nathaniel's obtained to get a deal with on his terrifying expertise for mana manipulation - quick. Observe his loopy journey as he takes on nightmarish foes, grapples with ethical dilemmas, and groups up with an eccentric bunch of allies to outsmart the percentages, survive, and emerge stronger than anybody else.***New chapters shall be launched on Monday, Tuesday, Thursday, and Friday (CET). Sometimes, I could publish an extra chapter if I can. Collapse Anti-social Protagonist, Antihero Protagonist, Calm Protagonist, Character Development, Intelligent Protagonist, Chilly Protagonist, Loopy Protagonist, Curious Protagonist, Quick Learner, Laborious-Working Protagonist, Introverted Protagonist, Magic, RPG, Survival, Sword And Magic, LitRPGStory Improvement: 4Writing High quality: 3World Background: 4Character Design: 3As of chapter 179.Let's begin with the plot. A bunch of individuals from a bus get transported to the tutorial. It is set at hell issue, the very best you may get picked to. From the very starting, the primary character shines. He has some form of battle intuition and instantly makes use of mana, although solely subconsciuosly. Everybody will get 2 expertise, one frequent and the opposite "becoming" them. Becoming, as a result of there are exceptions to this rule, and writer simply talked about it casually after 100 chapters. So mc will get his Focus, which helped him in battle and Mana Manipulation, or sth. He's a genius in relation to mana. Sadly, there are different folks there. His skills simply suck, in comparison with what others can do. For instance Desintegration ability, which accurately disintegrates something.Anyway, there's this lady named Sophie,Spoilerwho has Manipulation potential. She mainly f#cks up Nathan's (MC's identify) mind and he forgets a few of his recollections. There may be additionally the factor, with him not with the ability to damage her in any respect, whereas underneath the impact of her potential. Ofc he would not kill her, due to the potential advantages, she will present. If she simply died, our protagonist must spend 2 extra minutes on preventing. SecondlySpoiler, his Focus makes him supperss all his feelings. He will get dissed each chapter. Like actually, if you're this robust, present them their locations. It solely will get worse in later chapters.The writer actually hates Nathan. He offers him a number of obstacles, in types of his "comrades". Mc solely snaps, after somebody damage the lady (Lily), that has crush on him. He explains that he owes her. SpoilerShe used her ability, Sacrifise, to regrow his left arm, concurrently giving up hers (she has a therapeutic potential and will get it very quickly). Nathaniel kills 2 guys he simply met, and needs to kill Sophie, the bitch who tried killing him, however Lily makes him cease. It is actually irritating to observe his enemies nonetheless dwell, simply due to some nonexisting morals he has. In the beginning he appeared chilly and ruthless, however later he is only a large joke. SystemSystem just isn't badly written. There may be this cool standing window and it seems good. You may degree ability by turning into extra accustomed to them. Additionally, there's little to none explenations from the system. Solely the mandatory belongings you get from facet quest and quest are defined. Quest are usually about clearing a flooring. They range from surviving to killing. The true energy ups are usually facet quests. You may get them full whereas killing monsters and leveling up your expertise. There are much more facet quests. I believe as of now they'd higher rewards, than the quests. OvrOverall the story just isn't dangerous, however I began hating the few characters. I additionally was ready for a loner MC, studying the tags, however he's simply socially awkward. The writer would not know how one can write human relationships. He simply retains repeating identical factor again and again. Characters are too childlish and Mc being a wuss would not assist. I'd not suggest it to folks eager to expolre a brand new world, eager to impersonate the protagonist, as it will solely anger them. It is advisable preserve your distance, to actually take pleasure in this learn. Mid novel.Quote: FrankkioMeh it is first rate I assume Quote: FrankkioMeh it is first rate I assume Quote: FrankkioMeh it is first rate I assume #panic# os capítulos foram duplicadosObrigado por corrigirBeautifully crafted story. Simply give it time and you may develop to like itOkay so the beginning is a bit rocky and you are feeling the MC is speaking alot however belief me he is excellent and dumb he is aware of that himself particularly when does issues which you should not do. However he additionally has a really attention-grabbing and Mysterious previous which makes it value it, and there are alot off fleshed out characters and many motion so when you like quick paced, brutal motion and thoughts video games that is your cup of tea my friendХорошой тайтл но я почти вкинул єго когда идиот начал стрелять в убитого волка а не в шамана которй єго контролировал а также в самом начале он даже не поптался узнать навки других и как позже м узнали там бла уйма полезнх навков которє могли б очень сильно помош и ето єщо больше меня роздражаєт такоє ощущениє что главнй герой то умнй то он глупй и вот так он переключаєтся с тупого на умного и из умного на тупого и ето очень глупо со сторон автора єсли т делаєш главного героя умнм то пусть будет умнм а не делаєт елементарнє ошибки которє любой здравомслящий человек делать не будетDare mi opinión hasta el momento (cap 98) me parece muy bueno al principio algo soso pero fue mejorando con el tiempo incluso hasta donde lo e leido en estos momentos esta mucho mejor que el inicio, mejorando cada vez más, me alegro mucho de ello y ojala y proceed con este ritmo de cada vez interesarle al lector y que no se haga aburrida, espero y proceed así. (Actualizare mi opinión cuando lleve muchos más capitulos para tomarlo como sustanciales).Not like what one other reviewer talked about, the a number of POV is okay. It is uncommon and solely used as a strategy to present how the MC looks as if from others' POV.The beginning is a bit rocky, as if the writer is looking for their writing type and characters, but it surely stabilizes quickly sufficient.The MC additionally is not whiny complainer. They're extra of an delinquent cynic, or simply observing and emotionally reacting to troublesome issues with inner dialogs like most of us do.The story is fairly first rate, even when some characters are abnormally hostile and there's some 'film magic' that makes accidents vanish or give the MC infinite mana lolSeems to be written by an English speaker and the plot is not swiss cheese, so when you're into the brutal survival style then this ought to be a worthwhile learn.are there wmd or not? coz abstract has not stated something about itThe purpose of the tutorial is to create WMD, so it is the climbersThe second flooring has WMD's oh and there are just a few of themwhere can I discover the MTL?Treading on harmful paths my buddy...Weapon of Thoughts Destruction.